Three Writing Vignettes Sure to Make You Smile

Opening students’ eyes to the joys of poetry can be so rewarding!  With the release of my new book ‘Stella: Poet Extraordinaire’ last week, I’ve seen and heard a few interesting stories right here in my own little neighborhood.  First, the day after it arrived, I sent a copy of the book to school with my son, who happens to be a second grader, just like the main character.  His teacher read the book to the class that very day and took them out for a poetry walk.  Armed with clipboards and pencils they went out to observe and take notes, turning their musings into poems when they returned to the classroom.  Apparently, they were so taken with their work and the fun they had producing it, that they decided to start a ‘Poetry Club’ during recess!

A teacher in my school read the book and brainstormed descriptive and action words for fall leaves with her class.  Modeling how to turn words into interesting phrases, and phrases into poems, reading aloud students’ poems as they worked to produce them, several of her students wrote more than one poem that first day.  She asked me about their formatting, after all, formatting a poem so it looks and reads like a poem can be a challenge for students, especially when they are just starting their journeys as poets.  One technique is to type the poems for students, adding line breaks where needed, until they get more of a feel for the possibilities (obviously, reading tons of poetry and noting how authors use line breaks for effect is also a useful practice).  She happily typed their poems.  Now, every single day following their first experience, they have asked to have time to write poetry.  So far, they’ve completed three class collections of poetry in three days!

This last vignette tickles me, too, though it’s not about poetry.  A mom I know who has three boys bought the Stella books (the three book set before the fourth (poetry) was released) hoping to inspire her sons to write more.  She read two of them aloud over a couple of days, reporting she saw the boys light up and start to write with more ease.  Before she got to the third, her oldest son sneaked the book into his bedroom and was reading it under the covers with a flashlight!  He’s in fourth grade!  It’s a thrill to hear even older boys are gravitating toward Stella.

Writing these books has been gratifying beyond measure.  They’ve called up so many memories from my work with student-writers over the years and they excite me about the possibilities for future student-writers.  At the moment, I’m smiling ear-to-ear: the poetry light has been TURNED ON for a few more little humans!
Sometimes looking at something from a different angle can inspire innovative thoughts for poetry.

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Writing Is A Gift: Two Gifts in Two Days

Writing is a gift. 
It's a gift from the author, of course...
A gift of time,
commitment,
ideas,
life reflections,
of heart and soul.
It's a gift to the author, too...
A gift of enlightenment,
voice,
discovery,
challenge,
triumph. 
Writing is a gift.
It's a gift to the reader...
A gift of connection
to familiar ideas,
of inspiration 
from new ideas,
of joy in the beauty 
of words on a page.
Writing is a gift.
It's a gift of creation 
for everyone who writes
and everyone who reads.


Yesterday I received a gift in a padded manila envelope.  Inside...a poet and her classmates finally come to life, ready to inspire other writers to look at the world in new ways while writing oodles and oodles of poetry.  Poetry is a gift we can easily give to our students regularly.  Their words on the page become gifts they can keep forever.

Today I received another gift in a big cardboard box.  Inside...over a year of deep reflection about a career of teaching comes to life in 300 pages of purposeful, joyous instruction.  The gift we give our K-2 students when they see how reading and writing fit together and are used to achieve real purposes is life-changing.   

Two HUGE gifts in two successive days.  Out they go, these gifts, to make their mark on the world. Thanks to all those who've contributed.
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Donald Crews' 'Shortcut:' An Ideal Mentor Text for Personal Narrative Writing

Fall is the perfect time to get your students writing personal narratives!  Writing and sharing personal narratives is such a great way to get to know your students in more detail and for them to get to know their classmates.  Donald Crews' book Shortcut is an ideal mentor text to get your students going.  The story is engaging and realistic.  It's about a group of friends who decide to take a shortcut home along some railroad tracks.  As they make their way down the tracks, what is that they hear in the distance?  Whoo-Woo!  The sound is faint at first, but it grows louder and louder and louder.  When one boy realizes a train is upon them, he shouts for them to get off the tracks.  But, what about the horrible briers that cover the slopes and the water with snakes that follows along the tracks?  Are the kids okay?  We have to wait a long time to see, since Donald Crews keeps us in suspense as we watch the train move along the tracks (Klickity-klak, klickity-klak) for page after page!

Students can often relate to the characters and events, thinking of a time they did something foolish.  We use the book to inspire topic generation, to review the elements of narratives, to guide the creation of a personal narrative anchor chart, and to encourage the addition of onomatopoeia in students' stories. (Crews masterfully uses this element in Shortcut.  It's easy to encourage students to try onomatopoeia in their writing based on his model.) 
Our Personal Narrative Anchor Chart based on 'Shortcut'
I wrote a series of detailed lesson plans outlining the specific steps I've used to help students in grades 1-3 create the best personal narratives EVER using Shortcut as a mentor text.  The plans are written as if they were students' first exposure to writing personal narratives.  I just finished the series of lessons with a group of ecstatic second graders today.  They were in love with their stories, as was I!  I've never seen so much wonderful use of onomatopoeia--it really enlivens their texts (I also attempted to get them to use some dialogue, and several did).  I plan to ask a few parents if I can post some samples to share here (stay tuned!).  If you'd like a copy of the plans, I just posted them as a FREEBIE to TPT:  https://www.teacherspayteachers.com/Product/Personal-Narrative-Writing-with-Shortcut-by-Donald-Crews-as-a-Mentor-Text-2126155

These plans were adapted from my new book of integrated literacy lesson sequences which will be out THIS MONTH!
 
You can read more about the book on a post I created for this blog a few months back:  
Note:  There is also a 3-5 volume of Booster Lessons, written by master teacher Leslie Blauman.  
Check it out here:    http://www.corwin.com/books/Book245336

(It is now 2:30 AM and I teach a full day tomorrow.  The things we do for our fellow teachers!) 
(Also note:  The mystery word for this blog post and the Fall Mentor Text Hop is:  Klickity-klak  (from Donald Crews' Shortcut, of course!)

I hope you enjoy the posts and resources you've found on this Fall Mentor Text Hop!  Thanks for stopping by and Happy Personal Narrative Writing!   -Janiel    Here's the link to your next stop:


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